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    Northern Lights

    Inspired by Jomus' "My Siberian Challenge" I have decided to start writing a story of my own. It is the first time I have done anything like this and all praise and constructive criticism is welcome.

    It's entitled Northern Lights and I'm starting as manager of Kiruna FF in the Swedish Second division.

    Hope you enjoy it.

    https://northernlightsacm0102story.wordpress.com/

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    Nice one Billybums😂

    How's life in the Bloody Cold North?

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    Dang, I thought it was



    Oh well, now that I'm here....

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    Really enjoyed reading the first part. Will be following.

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    keeping ana eye on this - enjoyed the first instalment and I like your writing style

    Cracking 1st signing

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    Nice start

    Would love to follow you to get the Bantam job

    Too bad the mighty Windass would be probably retired by then

    Will be following on, neither less

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    Thanks for the feedback guys. Aiming to get chapters out twice weekly, Mondays and Fridays. I have to work so that gets in the way a bit.

    Next chapter will be out tomorrow. I manage to hire one of the great Swedish internationals of the last two decades onto my staff, and we play our first five matches of the season.

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    Nice one Billybums��

    How's life in the Bloody Cold North?
    It's freezing mate!!

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    Nice start

    Would love to follow you to get the Bantam job

    Too bad the mighty Windass would be probably retired by then

    Will be following on, neither less
    I think that will be some way off, but I would love to go back there one day. Currently they are not doing too great (There will be an update on that in the next chapter).

    Will be a shame Windass is a legend.

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    Third Chapter (Henrik Larssons Big Toe) is up now. Think it's gonna be easier for me to get them up on Wednesdays and Fridays.

    https://northernlightsacm0102story.w...ssons-big-toe/

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    Fun with the swedish league since I am a swede myself. Will follow this

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    What position is Pål Kristian Antonsen? Looks like could do a job as DMC?

    Milk before hot water - what's wrong with that? ll gets mixed up doesn't it

    Roland - what a signing

    Forward - great name for a team

    Good signing that striker


    Some real mixed results over the course of both updates - seems like you are slowly improving but maybe not getting the rub of the green either. Although mentally the players need to be better

    Enjoying the bits in between games of trevalling and staying in hotels for a week etc

    Good stuff!

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